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Rule Book Reading
User: Sad Enemy
Date: 9/30/2016 2:13 pm
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I'm at the point where I need people to read my rule book and give me creative feedback. However, no one I personally know seems willing to help. Anyone on here willing to give it a look over?

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Re: Rule Book Reading
User: Iamman
Date: 10/21/2016 10:01 pm
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May I have a link to some cards in the game? The rulebook seems very casual for a very specific type of game. I am not sure if it meshes well with what you may have in store.

Re: Rule Book Reading
User: Sad Enemy
Date: 10/27/2016 6:54 am
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Absolutely. You can go right here.

https://www.facebook.com/SadEnemyGames/

If you need more, just let me know. Thank you, I appreciate the help.

Re: Rule Book Reading
User: Ploridon Games
Date: 11/15/2016 10:24 am
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Hello,

Thanks for sharing your rule book. The rules seem pretty cut and dry for the most part. My concern is this ... the images and art are nice but are very distracting from learning the rules. I feel that some of the art and layouts make things a bit confusing. Also not sure if I missed it or if it wasn't included. I think a glossary of terms or a quick reference page would help out greatly. As a player I don't want to read the instructions as a story I want to dive in and enjoy the game as fast as possible. Consider a "lore" sheet that tells some background story and maybe have a clean, simple list of dos and songs and win conditions. All in all the game seems great and the art is awesome. Hope this helps.

Ploridon Games
Re: Rule Book Reading
User: Sad Enemy
Date: 11/15/2016 10:50 am
Views: 519
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Thank you for all your valubile input. I will check back over the art. I always feel like a rule book that is all words bores me as a reader. The rule book has a terms page, which is kind of like a glossary. Also the back of the rule book has a quick rule guide to look at so you don't have to constantly rummage through the rule book.

That you for the compliment on the art as well.

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